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The idea that people could be so strongly effected by writing intrigued me. I learned that there are different ways to accomplish this; some of these ways might be considered right and wrong. I could write something very libelous and spiteful, and I would receive a certain reaction to that. On the other hand, I could write something that you cared about. Others might find that they care about this too and react to it.

The idea that people are strongly affected by writing intrigued me. There are a couple different ways to achieve effectiveness; some may be right or wrong. If I wrote very libelous and spiteful, people would show a reaction to it. I would also write about something some one cared about and once others read it they cared as well.