Algorythme

The special presentation we were joyed with last Tuesday, week 13 was very exciting. I really liked how he put fun in writing, such as finding exquisite words to put in setences to really capture the readers attension. I also liked when he gave us his CD becuase I like rap music and that is what he is about. He really tries hard to be successful and hopefully one day he becomes a huge star.

Some one i have meet

I have meet quite a few people at hvcc, i would have to say my chem class i have the most friends in. There is Trevor and Ryan who is cool as hell and remind me of my friends in d burg. Arielle is another she is real cool because she always helps me in chem, signs me in if i cant make it to class and lets me copy some problems i have on home work ( but she tries to show me how to do them first). She reminds me of my friend molly.

week 9 due week 10

I have learned a lot these past couple of weeks such as passive and active voice but the biggest thing i have learned was where to put commas in proper places and what the : and ; mean. I have no other special requests for you to teach me but i am sure i will definitely learn more. I like everything about the class it is very laid back but also educational. The people in my class a very easy to get along with and i like that. At this point in time I have absolutely no complaints.

Truth

So far in class and any class assignments i have handed in are completely true. I think that there is no point in lying because you are who you are. Plus if you lie about something eventually the lie will get you back in one way or another. And usually you feel embarrassed and even worse some one might now trust you any more. So i try not to lie at all because I have learned my lesson enough times.

Week 5 blog

Since I can write about anything i am going to write about how I hate Tuesdays. There are many reasons why i hate Tuesdays; one, is i have to get up a 5 am to go straight to work which is a half hour from where i live. Two, i then work for only 2 and a half hours and have to drive to school at 8 30 where i hit traffic on I 90. Three, after my 9 o clock class i then go back to work until 1 30 where i then have to leave for this class. Four, once again i go back to work until 6 where i then go back to school for a two hour math class and finally i am done at 8 30. Five, the 45 minute drive home meaning i get through the door about 920. IT FUCKING SUCKS

Airport Security ESSAY

Airport security research would be furthered by looking though news papers recently on airport security and past news paper articles on security. Another way I would research more about this subject would be by googling the topic and possibly comparing the United States airport security to another country's security. Once I found the right information on the subject I would then sight my resources and be sure to add them in on my final essay. One site that is about this topic is air safe.com ( this site describe what you are allowed to bring on a plane). Another way i would turn airport security into a essay topic is by looking back in the history of plane flying to see if there are any other issues of security on planes. then i would show how security has changed since the previous problem.

Revision

At most of the parties i end at, people are usally playing for money. I love this type of pong play because now I have an unbelievable shot and I end up taking the loot home.

corrections

The idea that people could be so strongly effected by writing intrigued me. I learned that there are different ways to accomplish this; some of these ways might be considered right and wrong. I could write something very libelous and spiteful, and I would receive a certain reaction to that. On the other hand, I could write something that you cared about. Others might find that they care about this too and react to it.

The idea that people are strongly affected by writing intrigued me. There are a couple different ways to achieve effectiveness; some may be right or wrong. If I wrote very libelous and spiteful, people would show a reaction to it. I would also write about something some one cared about and once others read it they cared as well.

the essay that is due Thursday is giving me a very big problem because i cant think of anything i thought my self, most of the things i know i was taught by either a coach or a teacher. my parents also taught me many things. i also don't know shit about any authors or their styles. plus i don't read a lot on my own so i would have to look back on a book i read in high school so for now i am concentrating on a skill i taught myself.

When I was in 10 grade chemistry I had a teacher who was very hard to pay attention to, I would sit in class an just doze off into space. I couldn't pay attention to him because he would just sit at his desk an just rattle off definitions about subjects and at first I tried to write them down but i couldn't keep up with him. So what I would do was before each test I would sit down at night before i went to bed and read the chapter the test was on to myself, and in chemistry there is a lot of math that needs to be done. So when I came across examples in the book I would examine the problems and do each one until I got the same solution as the book. I would do this for probably most of the tests, just like Malcolm X, I taught myself but about chemistry.

What I would do if I was asked to write an essay is I would first think about the topic of the essay I was asked to write. I would start to group ideas in my head about the essay and form an outline and once I looked over the outline I would begin on a first draft by forming an appropriate introduction for the essay. Once I wrote an introduction I would move on the body paragraphs, my personal style I use if there is no specific length is that I write three body paragraphs and move on to the conclusion. For my first draft I like to use paper and pen before moving on to the computer. I then read over the rough draft and make any corrections, after I finish reading over the rough draft I try to give the paper to another person to see if they understand it and catch some of the mistakes I made while reading over the rough draft. Once I make sure the paper is good with out and stupid grammar mistakes I start on the final draft, and once again I read the paper over make any necessary corrections that I catch. I also like to give my final copy to someone to read over and help find any other mistakes I made. Then I look over to see if what I wrote is appropriate for the audience that will be reading my essay I just wrote. A great example of where I used this style was when I was writing my college application essays I made sure that I had no mistakes and that it was completely legible for anybody reading the essay. I had three English teachers in my school read my essay to make sure the essay was very good.